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Change: rolling her eyes. "Though I'd advise you to go there. I'm pretty sure he won't be hanging out here for a while." Kaza nodded pensively. They spent the rest of the meal in silence.end*Pyro=fireOceania=one of the three ruling dictatorships of 1984(the book, not the year)
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Change: Kaza. Over Replieddinner, Kaza,Kaza glaringsaid at"D'you thethink ground,I sheshould hatedask settingRedwing theif I could stay with him tomorrow?""Yeah, table.you can." said Eseth, rolling her eyes. *Pyro=fireOceania=one of the three ruling dictatorships of 1984(the book, not the year)
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Change: of boiling water. "That smells good." said Kaza hungrily."It's almost done, why don't you set the table, Kaza?""As you wish." Replied Kaza, glaring at the ground, she hated setting the table.*Pyro=fireOceania=one of the three ruling dictatorships of 1984(the book, not the year)
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Jul 25 2008, 6:39 PM EDT
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Change: There were only format changes (bold, italics, etc.) in this version. See this version for details.
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Change: Eseth sighed. "If you dislike him that much, you could probably stay with Redwing until his wing heals and he finds a place to stay."Kaza considered for a moment, blushing slightly at the thought, and said "Maybe I should."Eseth nodded, stirring meat and
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Change: Eseth cringed, and climbed down the ladder into the main hollow. Climbing down, she told Junin "I'll bring you something to eat soon. People with broken wings should probably get as much food as they can."Junin nodded, and watched her go.---Kaza glared at the
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Change: Eseth raised her eyebrows. "Really? Everyone else in the world calls them that. You're a Swan angel, the class right below you is Raven, and below that is Hawk." she narrowed her eyes as she thought. "I think there's also Owl angels, and Nightinggale, Eagle, and Osprey, but itthat's
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Change: bother talking to you."Junin scowled at her. "I'm not a noble," he told her. "And it's not racist if it's true.""But it's not true." Eseth pointed out. "Oh but it is."*Pyro=fireOceania=one of the three ruling dictatorships of 1984(the book, not the year)
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Change: it'sat her. hqard"I'm not toa benoble," whenhe Redtold Angelsher. are"And causingit's morenot troubleracist thanif they'reit's worth."true.""But it's not true." Eseth pointed out.*Pyro=fireOceania=one of the three ruling dictatorships of 1984(the book, not the year)
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Jul 22 2008, 11:19 AM EDT
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Change: Eseth sighed. "You misunderstood me. You're being a racist noble. Honestly, I don't know why I bother talking to you." "Racist?! Really? it's hqard not to be when Red Angels are causing more trouble than they're worth."*Pyro=fireOceania=one of the three ruling dictatorships of 1984(the book, not the year)
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Change: it stereotypical of me?" asked Junin. "If anything, the it?Red angels make themselves into stereotypes. Not us."Eseth sighed. "You misunderstood me. You're being a racist noble. Honestly, I myselfdon't know passionatelywhy hateI angelbother talking to society!"you."*Pyro=fireOceania=one of the
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Change: That's all there is to it." "Oh really?!"Eseth howled, her voice rising in rage, she was disgusted with Junin, "That's all there is to it? I myself passionately hate angel society!"*Pyro=fireOceania=one of the three ruling dicatorshipsdictatorships of 1984(the book, not the year)
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Change: Eseth glowered at him. "Rubbish indeed," she muttered. "Well, if you've never met a Hawk angel, how do you know that wrong.they're horrible?"Junin rolled his pale eyes at her. "Everyone says so," he said. "And Even,if like,Leader naturalMinyahn disastersJevorn and stuffthe Council like
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Change: "Well to begin"Well, with thethey're governmentnot neververy..." reallyhis likedvoice reddropped angels,to beinga aswhisper. it"Civilized, wasyou madeknow. Cause upfights ofand 100%things purewhenever swanthey angels."can.""Uhuh." replied Eseth."They blamed red
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Change: "Well to begin with the government never really liked red angels, being as it was made up of 100% pure swan angels.""Uhuh." replied Eseth."They blamed red angels for everything that went wrong. Even, like, natural disasters and stuff like that."*Pyro=fireOceania=one of the three
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Change: said he."Your government doesn't try to hide it?" she asked carefully.Junin shook his head. "They do say that the Red angels started it all." he shrugged. "I'm not surprised.""What's that supposed to mean?"*Pyro=fireOceania=one of the three ruling dicatorships of 1984(the book, not the year)
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Change: hand with an expression of the most pathetic submission. He looked into her eyes with the most romantic intentions. Eseth looked away and there was a long silence. Then Eseth asked, rudely shortening Junin's reverie, "So what's it like in that angel society of yours?"*Pyro=fireOceania=one of
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Change: Junin shrugged, bewildered. Then he grimaced in pain, a hand darting to his broken wing. Eseth noticed at once."Don't touch that!" she snapped. "It's a broken wing. You don't want to mess around with it."Junin lowered his hand. *Pyro=fireOceania=one of the three ruling
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Change: Eseth bit her lip. She hadn't expected Kaza top be that upset. "Don't mind her," she told Junin. "She's just angry that you'd treat her boyfriend so badly." she glanced at him. "Mind you, I'm not happy about the angel society, either. I think it's pretty horrible."Junin glared
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