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Change: dandelion, which was not good in case she ran out of meat. Worse, she had no sense of direction and would probably end up back at the town soon.She decided to just keep going straight.***Kaza fled into the darkening woods, her
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Change: "Someplace called Ocean's Flame. I don't know what that is. It looks like it's a long, long way away." She gave the map to Kaza,
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Change: get to a town." "Well there's only one way to find out." said Eseth in a practical tone. She pulled off the lid of the ornately carved jewlery box and gasped. There were many expensive-looking jewels in it. but that wasn't what Eseth was gasping at.
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Change: it thatfrom wemy barelymother havebecause anyit had something she didn't want food."me to see in it."Kaza sighedrolled her eyes and said "Typical. Is there jewelry or something in it? We might be able to sell it if we get to a town."
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Change: "Well I packed some food before I ran away." replied Eseth. She took the tattered backpack off her back and rummaged through it until she
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Change: thridthird day, it began to rain. She scowled, because even though she liked rain, it would hamper her ability to travel.After a few minutes of walking, keeping the worst of the rain off with
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Change: One, anis that I think you somehow sprained your ankle, and it takes a few days to heal a sprian without making it worse. Also we need somewhere we really want to go. And we need a hour."lot more food. We can't rely on just plants, you know."
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Change: "It just isn't fair that just because we have the art we should be binded to the land or married off to someone without even knowing it." sighed Kaza indignantly. "It just doesn't seem right."After a long and eerie silence Eseth suddenly
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Change: dramatically, throwing her head back, closing her eyes and placing a hand over her eyebrows like an over-enthusiastic actor. "It seem as if just yesterday we were frolicking through the forest as children. Do you remember that day we met? Oh how I wish those bygone days could be again."
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Change: again." "As do I Kaza! They were happy and care-free. Now it's as if we have the weight of the world upon our shoulders." replied Eseth with equal longing. "Why must everyone insist on taking advantage of the art? That is not what it was given to us for."
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Change: all that bad, thesereally, woods?but I just...wasn't ready. So I left."I wasran lookingaway foras youwell." Kaza!"Esethreplied Eseth, her golden eyes glaring at the ground. "They were going to bind me to the land. I didn't want to stay replied.there."
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Change: Kaza andKaza. Kaza, Finally having had the chance to examine this mysterious girls face up close, now knew exactly who she was."Eseth!" She cried trying to hug her. Once the girls joyous reunion hug was
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Change: who she was."Eseth!" She cried trying to hug her. Once the girls joyous reunion hug was over Kaza inquired with a questioning look in her pale blue eyes, "So, How is it that you came to be here in these woods? "I was looking for you !"EsethKaza!"Eseth replied.
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Change: running overtrying to awkwardly hug her. Once the girls joyous reunion hug was over Kaza inquired with a questioning look in her pale blue eyes, "So, How is it that you came to be here in these woods?"woods? "I was looking for you !" Eseth!"Eseth replied.
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Change: "Eseth!" She cried running over to awkwardly hug her. Once the girls joyous reunion hug was over Kaza inquired with a questioning look in her pale blue eyes, "So, How is it that you came to be here in these woods?" "I was looking for you!" Eseth
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Change: After a few minutes of walking, keeping the worst of the rain off with her cloak, she saw what looked like a person lying next
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Change: Right now, she determined she was probably about three miles or so out of her town and its surrounding territory, so she was safe. She sat down, pulled some bread and fruit out of her bag, tooand loudbegan to anyeat."""Three weeks later-Eseth was
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Change: and earth elves were.Kaza kept running.*** Eseth stopped, she heard something moving. It sounded like a person, too loud to any of the animals that normally lived in the forest. She listened for a moment, then continued running, it could be Ashji chasing after her..
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