Change: minin and out, and made stairs on the outside of the tree as well." Eseth shook her head. "I can't believe you're not fainedfainted after doing all that magic. Do you know how tree shaping works, exactly?"Kaza replied "No. Sorry.""Oh well. Hey, do   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 2690)

Change:  hit my friend with a hammer?"Redwing rubbed his face with his hands. "It's...kind of a long story."Eseth crossed her arms. "We have all the time in the world." she said. Redwing raised an eyebrow. "Let me get some chairs." he said.END   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 2689)

Change:  a sunburn."Kaza grinned. "I'd never. Anyway, let's get going."They walked into the wall through a large, open arch near the end of the icy bridge. On the inside were planted enormous trees whose roots and sometimes branches worked through the crumbling stone of the wall. The   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 2000)

Change: Abouta half-hour later, most of the bridge was secured by sturdy ice that rose right out of the ocean, and Kaza and Eseth were almost   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 1666)

Change: They were looking at a bridge, secured to the island by means of steady metal pegs, thrust deep into two rocks, deeply embedded in the   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 1440)

Change: "Well, I think I'll make a door, but, unfortunately, it can only be opened with Hydromancy, which you might not have avaliable all the time.   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 1250)

Change: She took a drink of water from her waterskin, and walked into the interior of the tree. It was beautiful, in its own way. There   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 906)

Change: Eseth sat up and stretched, and turning to find Kaza's bed empty, as usual. They had been on the island for five weeks, and Kaza   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 273)

Change: Created by Kaza999 Jun 14 2008, 6:13 PM EDT for: no reason given