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Change: minin and out, and made stairs on the outside of the tree as well." Eseth shook her head. "I can't believe you're not fainedfainted after doing all that magic. Do you know how tree shaping works, exactly?"Kaza replied "No. Sorry.""Oh well. Hey, do
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Change: hit my friend with a hammer?"Redwing rubbed his face with his hands. "It's...kind of a long story."Eseth crossed her arms. "We have all the time in the world." she said. Redwing raised an eyebrow. "Let me get some chairs." he said.END
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Change: To their surprise, the wooden door swung open easily. It made Kaza nervous, though she didn't tell Eseth so. The inside of the tower was
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Change: a sunburn."Kaza grinned. "I'd never. Anyway, let's get going."They walked into the wall through a large, open arch near the end of the icy bridge. On the inside were planted enormous trees whose roots and sometimes branches worked through the crumbling stone of the wall. The
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Change: "I'm beat."sighed Kaza as she sank in a sitting position on the ground. "Yes let's rest for a while." agreed Eseth, clearly very tired herself.
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Change: Abouta half-hour later, most of the bridge was secured by sturdy ice that rose right out of the ocean, and Kaza and Eseth were almost
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Change: "But don't you think it ould have been mentioned on the map?""Maybe they forgot to put it on. Or they didn't want people to know. Either way, maybe we should go look at it."Eseth cringed. "Are you kdding? That bridge looks like it's about to collapse any minute!"
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Change: They were looking at a bridge, secured to the island by means of steady metal pegs, thrust deep into two rocks, deeply embedded in the
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Change: tree as well." Eseth shook her head. "I can't believe you're not fained after doing all that magic. Do you know how tree shaping works, exactly?"Kaza replied "No. Sorry.""Oh well. Hey, do you want to explore the island? I think we're near the coast."
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Change: "Well, I think I'll make a door, but, unfortunately, it can only be opened with Hydromancy, which you might not have avaliable all the time.
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Change: grove of trees together.She merely picked up a bowl of rabbit stew for Kaza and walked to the stream. She found that Kaza wasn't outside the tree, but when she had walked around the whole thing, she found about three windows and a doorless doorframe.
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Change: She took a drink of water from her waterskin, and walked into the interior of the tree. It was beautiful, in its own way. There
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Change: She placed the knife back in its sheith and put it on the ground. She placed her hands on either side of the gash, forcing
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Change: Eseth sat up and stretched, and turning to find Kaza's bed empty, as usual. They had been on the island for five weeks, and Kaza
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