Change: NeverthelessIn Eseth walked outside. Maybe shespite could findof somethe newcold and exciting amusement outside. Itthe wassnow, worthEseth awalked try.outside. PerhapsMaybe she could take a refrehing run around the island.find Orsomething climbto ado. tree.---end   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 2001)

Change: had to find something, anything else to do. She hoped Kaza wasn't havingran such a boring time.Shehand wishedthrough Kazaher werebright here.red Ithair, wouldn'tsighing beagain. boringIt ifwas shegoing wereto her.be Kazaan wasexcrutiatingly alwayslong   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 1982)

Change:  thenboring. itBoring boring borrrrriiiingg. That's all she was silentdoing, aslooking theyafter atean theobnoxious splendidSwan arrayand ofcooking. food.Great. Lovely. She'd personally find him a place to stay after his wing was healed, and she would make sure it was underground.   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 1940)

Change:  find it again.Then they both walked down the corridor to the dining room where there was pleasentpleasant little layout of lunch. The aforesaid dining room was a well lit cheery little room with gray carpet and a little table with a red checkered table cloth.   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 1758)

Change: Ocean's Flame maps, a whole lot more detailed than the one OceansflameI maps."have.""These"They includehave my tower."tower on them," Redwing observed. "And others."Yeah"Yeah, they dodo, and pluslook!" Kaza pointed allto the Underpaths map. "All these tunnels are mapped. Look."mapped."   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 1715)

Change:  instead."Kaza nodded. "There's a secret room down there," she said, pointing down the passage. "Come on, I'll show you." And Kaza walked ahead, never looking back to make sure Redwing actually followed her.Redwing hovered in the doorway and then followed her. "See, there's some updated Oceansflame maps."   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 1553)

Change: Redwing looking curiously over the edge. Kaza raised her eyebrows."I didn't know this was here," said he. "Anything interesting down there? I was going to get you for lunch, but found this instead.""Oh yes! I found these too maps!"   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 1503)

Change: and gasped. The landing was brightly-lit, not by windows or lamps, but by strange, glowing stones. A map was tacked up on one part of the wall, and several books were stacked on a shelf. Kaza shivered as she saw a pair of boots and some clothes, as well.   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 1291)

Change:  roughly made, it was the only interesting thing in the room. She walked slowly toward it. Perhaps there was something interesting stored in the room. She gingerly turned the dusty iron door knob and the door swung inward.   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 1192)

Change: still had glass in them, though it was cracked and dirty. She recoiled from the window, resolving to help Redwing collect some sand to make new glass. It was lucky they had a pyromancer on the island."Kaza! lunch!"   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 1028)