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1. Okay, if you've read Relationships, you'll know some of what I have in mind. Junin falls(not quickly) for Eseth, but she does nothing in return. We all know Kaza and Redwing are all syrupy around each other, so we don't need to get into that.

2. I have an idea for the end of the series. I don't want to give up Kaza and Eseth and Redwing too fast, so it will be in a good while, and circumstances will probably change. Okay, I want everyone except Junin to die in a massive epic battle involving the angels and politics and violence thereof. Unfortunately, according to the angel city's Oracle or whatever, they haven't finished what they were supposed to do, and will be reincarnated. And Junin has to find them. He basically has to find them by searching for each and every misfit in the world.
Or something.

3. Beeeg war.


4. Kk, in summer, when everyone's cabin fever and broken wings and things are all over, they will all go and look in the secret paths under the island. Basically, there's a network of paths under the island, all of them, except the one in Redwing's tower, connect to each other. We get enough info from the passages, and other connected lighthouse/tower things on the other side of the island, and we figure out what the whole deal with the island is, and why Eseth's mother had the map in the first place.

5. ok so i was thinking....what if Kaza and Eseth like met a god or godess? Any one it doesnt really matter. just one of the major ones that is important to both of them. The god/godess would call them to duty at some task of divine importance like stopping a war. Ok so here's how this idea would happen in the story:

Kaza goes down and explores the tunnels under OF. she finds an old water talisman with some writing on it that leads her to a ruined altar that nobody had prayed at for thousands of years. She realizes, as she reads some writing written in some old forgotten language, it's an altar of the water people, used for summoning divine beings in cases of extreme distress or if someone needs an answer to a question or something. So she figures maybe she can get everyone off the island and back to the real world if she summons the goddess of water. The goddess of water comes down from heaven (or whatever they call the place where the gods dwell) and is like "I'm not sending you back to your land so stop bothering me." and then Kaza begs her and begs her until the finally the goddess gives her a magical gift of some sort to improve her water bending ability.

Hmm...I don't know about that one. Gods getting involved isn't usually a good idea. I mean, Tamora Pierce can pull it off pretty well, but that's because her gods always cause so much trouble. Anyway, I don't think that a god can manifest itself on Ocean's Flame because there aren't any Temples or Holy Ground there. Gods have rules too. If you make up the storyline yourself, I'll consider it.


6. They could meet a unicorn and... lol JK
They should like LEAVE this god-forsaken island and find out whatever the crap Is going on in the rest of the planet.. Eseth should be dying of tottal boredom by now.. The Guys could like Bond with each over while kaza and eseth go do whatever.. Then Junin's search party could come and find him.. He could deny his relationships with Redwing, be welcomed into socety again and Redwin would be kidnapped and Eseth and kaza would go to find him. Kaza could express her un dying love for redwing and wach him get killed.. Eseth could Got to Rip Junins head off for betraying them and end up getting killed. Then Junin would realise he was biotch and try to find the re-encarated eseth kaza and redfeather...
OMG that's an incredibly great idea! I shall use it, but they shall not die. Um...lessee...Junin's search party finds him, he hands redwing over, and kaza as well for some trumped-up aiding and abetting the enemy charge...eseth goes and kicks the crap out of him and forces him to help rescue them, however, kaza and redwing have the rescuing angle pretty much covered. No dying, pa-leeze. I have decided that.

















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superclare7 awesome! 0 Aug 4 2008, 6:28 PM EDT by superclare7
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love the ideas! Their perfect!
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